Monday, May 08, 2006

ode to naveed

naveed! naveed! naveed!
if i offended you with my previous deed
your forgiveness and mercy i do plead.
for i swear by Allah’s creed
hurting you was not my intention, indeed!
you are like a sister i go to in need
and it is with you i prefer to spend my eid.
but if this ode has not removed the seed
of sorrow in your heart that breeds,
go ahead! hit me till i bleed.
perhaps then, i shall die a shaheed
and from my blog, forever you will be freed.

4 Comments:

Blogger tails of a mad cow said...

*applause*

tis brillaint!!

I'm also liking 'tharwa - the compulsive blogger' - 4 posts in a couple of days, eh? Looks like i'm not the only OCD-er in the house :P

Toodle pip

12:14 AM  
Blogger mad as a cambridge bicycle said...

beautiful (sniff)

4:42 AM  
Blogger Umm Musa said...

awwwww today i was thinking what poen u were on about, its all clear now!

And if Naveed didnt forgive you after that beautifull poen, she's got problems!

3:46 PM  
Anonymous fazila said...

since when did you become a poet?

12:10 AM  

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